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Aet Lindling

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: but anatomy can be tranquil too

    Alright, part two! This is a surprising turn for me, as you alluded to in your reply to my review of the previous poem! Going back to that I see ...

    May 30
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Fire

    Happy Review Day! So then, let's get into it. There are some nice choices here. I like how you illustrated the difference between the positive and negative stanzas through the ...

    May 30
  • Poetry » Narrative, Politics Re: What does it mean to be Asian?

    I like this poem, it clearly came from a deeply personal place. I'm not going to do a very in depth critique about the themes or anything because I feel ...

    Apr 22
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: 7 Minutes Left -- 6:00|Part 1

    First Impressions Less happens in this part than the climactic part I reviewed before or really any of the parts before it seems, but this must be an important memory ...

    Apr 21
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: 7 Minutes Left -- 7:00|Part 4

    First Impressions The climax to minute 7! While I haven't reviewed the previous parts, rest assured I have read them! Let's get into it. Quite the reveal! I was thinking ...

    Apr 21
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Penance Unto Me, For Me

    Hi there! Let's get on with a critique of this poem, shall we? I like the complicated but reprehensible character you portray here. The emotions are all mostly relatable, and ...

    Apr 20
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: WoS Chapter 1 Part 1: Zoe

    Well, you were kind enough to do two reviews of my work today, so I better at least do my second review of your work of all time. Sweating smile ...

    Apr 17
  • Article / Essay » Culture, General Re: David Foster Wallace Keeps His Head

    Oh snap! Now I have to finish Infinite Jest to review this! No, I doubt that's necessary. I just wanted to call back to my comment on your Napoleon Dynamite ...

    Apr 10
  • Short Story » Horror, Science Fiction Re: “The Fog”

    Alright, let's jump right into this wild piece! I love how you suddenly crash the reader head on into this smorgasbord of judgmental description of all these characters from the ...

    Apr 10
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: World of Souls - Prologue

    Alright, it's finally time to dig into one of Tikaya's frighteningly long fanfictions. (Novels that are posted as a million short chapters at a rate of ten chapters a day ...

    Apr 4
  • Script » Humor, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Hunt for the Delawackus

    Hello hello! Sorry it took me so long to get to this! I had a lovely half-complete review going but it seems to have disappeared somehow after loading from autosave ...

    Mar 29
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Z-9826

    This has been in the Green Room much too long for what a great poem it is, so let’s fix that. Wow, I like the formatting here a lot . ...

    Mar 25
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Suicide

    Time to try reviewing something other than poetry, now that I drained the Green Room of 0 review poems. Goodness, this is quite the heavy piece. First off I’d highly ...

    Mar 24
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Your blood and greed (ambition of the mind)

    Ooh I like this. Love a poem that describes the universal human condition in such unflinching terms. Love a good bit of free verse that isn’t afraid to expound at ...

    Mar 22
  • Other » Lyrical, Supernatural Re: 🪻🌨️ They all had to watch 🌨️🪻

    Oh hey there! It’s the last poem/lyric from the green room that I have to get to from before today that has zero reviews! So, I put this one off ...

    Mar 22


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